Excerpts from Script Review 1 on The Black List
Strengths:
This story is beautifully written and deeply engaging. The plot develops organically, offering astute commentary about youth being trapped by social stratification. The boys have very distinct personalities and dimensional emotions, and the tone and dynamics between the boys is impressively realistic. The dialogue is on point and never boring, and the romantic subplot is unconventional, endearing, and subtle. It's a great story that's well-executed.
Prospects:
This is an engaging story that's well-executed, and it could easily be a successful indie film...the writing is wonderfully realistic and very high quality.
This story is beautifully written and deeply engaging. The plot develops organically, offering astute commentary about youth being trapped by social stratification. The boys have very distinct personalities and dimensional emotions, and the tone and dynamics between the boys is impressively realistic. The dialogue is on point and never boring, and the romantic subplot is unconventional, endearing, and subtle. It's a great story that's well-executed.
Prospects:
This is an engaging story that's well-executed, and it could easily be a successful indie film...the writing is wonderfully realistic and very high quality.